Leah, my editor and I had a long phone conversation today, where she outlined her comments on the initial draft, which she is sending on to me tomorrow. I am very happy with the changes she has asked for – many of them I have thought of myself, and others are structural solutions to problems I know are there. I am itching to get going on it – I want to make the novel perfect, and Leah’s insights are going to help me do that.